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Love After Marriage!!!

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  1. sreeram

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    Rith wonderful episode. I just love your writing. All the best dear.

    Have a happy and wonderful time with your family. I was thinking of telling you about vacation when you worried about not being able to be with your kid.

    Am happy for you dear. Have a happy and safe journey.
     
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    eagerly waiting for the next episode Rith.
     
  3. Rith

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    Episode 3

    “Hey Sindhu! See this guy. I have seen him somewhere”

    Sindhu grabbed the photo and looked at it “Mom! He is dad’s colleague’s son. The one who went to Vietnam after his studies got over”

    “Yeah! I remember now. He is looking like a man who is married thrice and have 10 children”

    “Add 2 more grandchildren Mom.” they chuckled

    “How come your dad is getting such groom I don’t know. What is his name? Kalyanaraman @ Kaly. What a name!!”

    “Don’t worry Mrs.Radha. Sindhu will not marry Kaly koli poli and all. Stay chill. Bring me some more banana chips that you have prepared” Sindhu started reading her book

    Ganapathy called Radha “What did she say?”

    “As per your wish” she went silently to the kitchen thinking how the alliance will be stopped

    2 days later Ganapathy got information that Mr. Kaly is a chain smoker and frequent drinker. Earlier he was told that Kaly is a teetotaller. Being from orthodox family he doesn’t want to precede this alliance further

    Likewise each and every alliance he gets was stopped somehow for some reason. The only person who was so happy about it was Sindhu. She has completed her MSc now and applied for PhD happily. She has also started trying for teaching jobs in nearby colleges

    At Bharath’s office:

    Bharath showed the photos shared by Menaka in whats app to his friend Vinoth

    “Hey, this girl looks better compared to what you have showed earlier”

    Bharath started at him. “Buddy! If you don’t like, no problem da. You better marry Hasini who proposed you last month”

    “I would rather go as a father in a church than marrying Hasini”

    “Why can’t you try becoming father to her children instead” Vinoth got a nice punch immediately

    “Mom does not understand da. I hate marriage. I LLLooooove to be mamma’s boy enjoying like this with you”

    “May be. But promise me you wont stop when I wave you Tata, bye bye along with my wife. You become a father in church. I will become father for my kids and will come to you for baptismal them“

    “That’s only when you get married babe. Pray your god that I should not talk about crushes and sights to your wife. If I do, then I think you have to join me baptizing other’s children”

    “What a friend buddy. You don’t look at girls. Fine! Why you are not allowing me to look as well”

    “Because girls are dangerous”

    Vinoth shut his mouth and didn’t speak further. He was expecting a girl to come in his life to change his attitude towards Girls. Bharath as usual rejected all the alliances shown by Menaka

    Stay Tuned...
     
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    Thanks dear for your wishes. The trip was good. I have posted the next epdisode. Enjoy!!
     
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    Thanks dear. I have posted the next episode. Enjoy!!
     
  6. Rith

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    Thank you Priya. It was an awesome short and sweet trip. Felt a bit that 2 days have completed so soon. It would be good if we have an option for pause button in life :roll:
     
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    very small episode :(
     
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    Episode 4

    Bharath has become Team Lead now. He got a promotion with good hike.

    Menaka felt very happy seeing his growth. But she was also worried for him not showing any interest towards the marriage

    Between on Bharath’s birthday Menaka took him to temple for special pooja. Ganapathy and Radha were been to the same temple to pray god for finding best suitable match for their daughter.

    Now the destiny has started its game. Menaka and Ganapathy’s common friend Mr. Moorthy visited the temple.

    He met Ganapathy first. When they were talking Bharath identified Moorthy and greeted him. He fell on his feet seeking his blessing. Menaka also joined and greeted each other.

    Moorthy introduced Menaka to Ganapthy’s family. After asking each other’s whereabouts, Menaka and Bharath left.

    Moorthy was appreciating to Ganapathy about how Menaka’s strength and confidence helped her in bringing her son without any support. He also informed that she is searching for suitable match for his son.

    Suddenly it strikes him and asked Ganapathy to share his daughter’s horoscope. Ganapathy used to carry Sindhu’s horoscope just like his visiting card; whomsoever ask he would give. Same way, he shared her horoscope to Moorthy and left. Since lot of proposals were rejected at first stage, Ganapathy was exhausted and was just one step back to distribute her horoscope like a bit notice to everyone. Radha and Sindhu even had that fear whether he would do that one day.

    Moorthy shared Sindhu’s horoscope to Menaka. She immediately approached her astrologer to check the compatibility. Same way Bharath’s horoscope was given to Ganapathy. He seeked his astrologer to check whether the horoscopes are matching.

    To their aspiration, the match was so perfect. Their astrologer asked them to proceed with this alliance with 100% trust.

    Both informed Moorthy and he took the responsibility to arrange the girl seeing ceremony at Sindhu’s house. The photos were exchanged between the families. Ganapathy was desperate to fix Manoj for Sindhu as he liked Menaka’s family

    Radha with much of fear approached Sindhu to inform this. Sindhu’s heart warned her that this alliance is not like what she got before. She could sense something wrong gonna happen. After Radha has informed she started planning to stop her marriage

    At Bharath’s side, again he started throwing tantrums for marriage. Menaka don’t want to leave this proposal as the girl’s side is from known source and the compatibility is good. She went and locked herself in a room

    This behaviorism seems very strange for Bharath. He has never seen his mom like this. For first 3-4 hours he left. But even after that when there was no sign for Menaka to come out he started sensing something wrong.

    He started dashing the door “Mom! Please open the door. Why are you behaving like this? Open the door Mom”

    “No Bharath! So far I have lived for your happiness. Now you are taking advantage of it. I don’t want to talk to such disobedient son”

    “Fine. Please don’t talk. At least eat something. Doctor told na you are so weak”

    “I wont unless you make me happy”

    “Please don’t threaten like this Mom!”

    …………….

    “Mom..” He was continuously dashing the door. When it became 7 hours and Menaka still didn’t come out, Bharath could sense the condition is not in favor for him

    She didn’t have even a cup of water. There was no sound from inside. Bharath was frightened to the core

    He banged and with the help of watchmen and nearby shopkeeper he broke the door and peeked in. His face was covered with sweat. His heart stopped beating when he saw Menaka lying on the floor without any movement

    Stay Tuned….
     
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    Stay cool. I have posted the next episode. Enjoy and share your feedback
     
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    Rith good going .very nice
     

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